{"id":5736,"date":"2025-06-29T09:00:31","date_gmt":"2025-06-29T02:00:31","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/?p=5736"},"modified":"2025-06-24T16:47:23","modified_gmt":"2025-06-24T09:47:23","slug":"coherence-and-cohesion","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/coherence-and-cohesion","title":{"rendered":"Ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion gi\u00fap \u1eb5m tr\u1ecdn \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<div id=\"ez-toc-container\" class=\"ez-toc-v2_0_66_1 counter-hierarchy ez-toc-counter ez-toc-custom ez-toc-container-direction\">\n<div class=\"ez-toc-title-container\">\n<p class=\"ez-toc-title \" >N\u1ed9i dung ch&iacute;nh<\/p>\n<span class=\"ez-toc-title-toggle\"><a href=\"#\" class=\"ez-toc-pull-right ez-toc-btn ez-toc-btn-xs ez-toc-btn-default ez-toc-toggle\" aria-label=\"Toggle Table of Content\"><span class=\"ez-toc-js-icon-con\"><span class=\"\"><span class=\"eztoc-hide\" style=\"display:none;\">Toggle<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-icon-toggle-span\"><svg style=\"fill: #28282d;color:#28282d\" xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" class=\"list-377408\" width=\"20px\" height=\"20px\" viewBox=\"0 0 24 24\" fill=\"none\"><path d=\"M6 6H4v2h2V6zm14 0H8v2h12V6zM4 11h2v2H4v-2zm16 0H8v2h12v-2zM4 16h2v2H4v-2zm16 0H8v2h12v-2z\" fill=\"currentColor\"><\/path><\/svg><svg style=\"fill: #28282d;color:#28282d\" class=\"arrow-unsorted-368013\" xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" width=\"10px\" height=\"10px\" viewBox=\"0 0 24 24\" version=\"1.2\" baseProfile=\"tiny\"><path d=\"M18.2 9.3l-6.2-6.3-6.2 6.3c-.2.2-.3.4-.3.7s.1.5.3.7c.2.2.4.3.7.3h11c.3 0 .5-.1.7-.3.2-.2.3-.5.3-.7s-.1-.5-.3-.7zM5.8 14.7l6.2 6.3 6.2-6.3c.2-.2.3-.5.3-.7s-.1-.5-.3-.7c-.2-.2-.4-.3-.7-.3h-11c-.3 0-.5.1-.7.3-.2.2-.3.5-.3.7s.1.5.3.7z\"\/><\/svg><\/span><\/span><\/span><\/a><\/span><\/div>\n<nav><ul class='ez-toc-list ez-toc-list-level-1 ' ><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-1\" href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/coherence-and-cohesion\/#I_Coherence_and_Cohesion_la_gi\" title=\"I. Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec?\">I. Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec?<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-2\" href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/coherence-and-cohesion\/#II_Su_khac_biet_giua_tieu_chi_Coherence_and_Cohesion\" title=\"II. S\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t gi\u1eefa ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion\">II. S\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t gi\u1eefa ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-3\" href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/coherence-and-cohesion\/#III_Bi_kip_am_tron_diem_IELTS_Writing_voi_tieu_chi_Coherence_and_Cohesion\" title=\"III. B\u00ed k\u00edp \u1eb5m tr\u1ecdn \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion\">III. B\u00ed k\u00edp \u1eb5m tr\u1ecdn \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-4\" href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/coherence-and-cohesion\/#IV_Nhung_loi_Coherence_and_Cohesion_pho_bien\" title=\"IV. Nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i Coherence and Cohesion ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn\">IV. Nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i Coherence and Cohesion ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-5\" href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/coherence-and-cohesion\/#V_Cohesion_and_Coherence_Exercise\" title=\"V. Cohesion and Coherence Exercise\">V. Cohesion and Coherence Exercise<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/nav><\/div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Trong m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn IELTS Writing Task 2, b\u00ean c\u1ea1nh 2 y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 r\u1ea5t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c quan t\u00e2m l\u00e0 t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng v\u00e0 ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p, ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion c\u0169ng chi\u1ebfm t\u1edbi \u00bc s\u1ed1 \u0111i\u1ec3m b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft. Do v\u1eady, \u0111\u1ec3 ho\u00e0n th\u00e0nh t\u1ed1t ph\u1ea7n thi, th\u00ed sinh c\u00f2n c\u1ea7n tri\u1ec3n khai b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 logic. Trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft h\u00f4m nay, <a href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/\"><strong>The Catalyst for English<\/strong><\/a> xin gi\u1edbi thi\u1ec7u \u0111\u1ebfn c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n c\u00e1c b\u01b0\u1edbc l\u00e0m \u0111\u1ec3 c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u0111i\u1ec3m cao trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion nh\u00e9!<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"I_Coherence_and_Cohesion_la_gi\"><\/span><b>I. Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec?<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">S\u1ef1 g\u1eafn k\u1ebft v\u00e0 t\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c (Coherence and Cohesion &#8211; CC) l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t trong b\u1ed1n ti\u00eau ch\u00ed \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i thi IELTS Writing Task 2. C\u00e1c ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ph\u1ee5 c\u1ee7a Coherence and Cohesion bao g\u1ed3m:<\/span><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_5742\" style=\"width: 1210px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-5742\" class=\"size-full wp-image-5742\" src=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/coherence-and-cohesion-la-gi-1.jpg\" alt=\"Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec?\" width=\"1200\" height=\"750\" srcset=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/coherence-and-cohesion-la-gi-1.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/coherence-and-cohesion-la-gi-1-300x188.jpg 300w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/coherence-and-cohesion-la-gi-1-1024x640.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/coherence-and-cohesion-la-gi-1-768x480.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-5742\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Coherence and Cohesion l\u00e0 g\u00ec?<\/p><\/div>\n<table style=\"width: 98.436%;\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><b>Coherence and Cohesion<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1c th\u00f4ng tin v\u00e0 \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch logic v\u00e0 th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1ef1 ti\u1ebfn tri\u1ec3n hay ch\u01b0a?<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft: t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c v\u00e0 linh ho\u1ea1t hay ch\u01b0a<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">B\u00e0i vi\u1ebft \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c chia \u0111o\u1ea1n ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p v\u00e0 \u0111\u1ea7y \u0111\u1ee7 hay ch\u01b0a.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c Band \u0111i\u1ec3m 7.0, th\u00ed sinh c\u1ea7n tho\u1ea3 m\u00e3n c\u00e1c y\u00eau c\u1ea7u sau trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed <\/span><b>Coherence and Cohesion:<\/b><\/p>\n<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><b>Band 7.0<\/b><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><b>Coherence and Cohesion<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><b>Th\u00f4ng tin v\u00e0 \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch logic<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, v\u00e0 <\/span><b>c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> xuy\u00ean su\u1ed1t b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft. (C\u00f3 th\u1ec3 x\u1ea3y ra m\u1ed9t v\u00e0i sai s\u00f3t nh\u1ecf, nh\u01b0ng kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u00e1ng k\u1ec3.)<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><b>C\u00e1c c\u00f4ng c\u1ee5 li\u00ean k\u1ebft<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, bao g\u1ed3m c\u00e1c t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c <\/span><b>s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch linh ho\u1ea1t<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> nh\u01b0ng c\u00f3 m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 l\u1ed7i ho\u1eb7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng qu\u00e1 \u00edt\/qu\u00e1 nhi\u1ec1u.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><b>Vi\u1ec7c chia \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n th\u01b0\u1eddng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> \u0111\u1ec3 h\u1ed7 tr\u1ee3 t\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c t\u1ed5ng th\u1ec3, v\u00e0 tr\u00ecnh t\u1ef1 s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp \u00fd trong \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n nh\u00ecn chung l\u00e0 h\u1ee3p l\u00fd.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><b>V\u00ed d\u1ee5 v\u1edbi \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i sau:<\/b><b><i>\u00a0<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p><b><i>+ \u0110\u1ec1 b\u00e0i:<\/i><\/b><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><b>Tr\u00edch \u0111o\u1ea1n b\u00e0i m\u1eabu t\u1eeb th\u1ea7y Simon, c\u1ef1u gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o ch\u1ea5m thi IELTS:<\/b><\/p>\n<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td><b>C\u00e2u Thesis:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>(1)<\/b><b> Topic sentence:<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Body 1: There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Body 2: In my view, governments should support local film industries financially.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><b>Details body 1:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(3) <\/span><b>Firstly<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects, and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Avatar<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> or the James Bond films are examples of <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(2)<\/span><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">such <\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(3)<\/span> <b>Another reason <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">why <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(2)<\/span><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">these <\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">big-budget films are so successful is that <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(2)<\/span><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">they <\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">often star the most famous actors and actresses, and <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(2)<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor-quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers<\/span><b> in comparison<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">.<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tr\u00edch \u0111o\u1ea1n b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft tr\u00ean \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u01b0\u1edbc l\u01b0\u1ee3ng \u0111\u1ea1t band 8.0+ trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed CC th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u1edf vi\u1ec7c:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>(1)<\/b> <span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">N\u1ed9i dung 2 ph\u1ea7n body l\u00e0 s\u1ef1 <\/span><b>m\u1edf r\u1ed9ng<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> v\u00e0<\/span><b> l\u00e0m r\u00f5 h\u01a1n \u00fd<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> c\u1ee7a c\u00e2u Thesis. \u0110i\u1ec1u n\u00e0y th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c vi\u1ec7c b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn <\/span><b>c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n v\u1ec1 m\u1eb7t \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng v\u00e0 th\u00f4ng tin<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. M\u1ed7i \u0111o\u1ea1n c\u00f3 m\u1ed9t \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng xuy\u00ean su\u1ed1t.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>(2)<\/strong><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 <\/span><b>c\u00e1c t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> such, these, they<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>(3)<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 <\/span><b>c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Firstly, Another Reason.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"II_Su_khac_biet_giua_tieu_chi_Coherence_and_Cohesion\"><\/span><b>II. S\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t gi\u1eefa ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u01b0 v\u1eady s\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t gi\u1eefa Coherence and Cohesion trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed CC l\u00e0 g\u00ec, TCE s\u1ebd gi\u1edbi thi\u1ec7u \u0111\u1ebfn c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n ngay trong ph\u1ea7n n\u00e0y.<\/span><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_5743\" style=\"width: 1210px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-5743\" class=\"size-full wp-image-5743\" src=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/su-khac-biet-giua-tieu-chi-coherence-and-cohesion.jpg\" alt=\"S\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t gi\u1eefa ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion\" width=\"1200\" height=\"750\" srcset=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/su-khac-biet-giua-tieu-chi-coherence-and-cohesion.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/su-khac-biet-giua-tieu-chi-coherence-and-cohesion-300x188.jpg 300w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/su-khac-biet-giua-tieu-chi-coherence-and-cohesion-1024x640.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/su-khac-biet-giua-tieu-chi-coherence-and-cohesion-768x480.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-5743\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">S\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t gi\u1eefa ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion<\/p><\/div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f9ng xem l\u1ea1i v\u00ed d\u1ee5 tr\u00ean \u0111\u1ec3 nh\u00ecn th\u1ea5y s\u1ef1 kh\u00e1c bi\u1ec7t gi\u1eefa hai y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 n\u00e0y nh\u00e9:<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 50%;\"><b><i>(1)<\/i><\/b> <i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">N\u1ed9i dung 2 ph\u1ea7n body l\u00e0 s\u1ef1 m\u1edf r\u1ed9ng v\u00e0 l\u00e0m r\u00f5 h\u01a1n \u00fd \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n trong c\u00e2u thesis. th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c vi\u1ec7c b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n v\u1ec1 m\u1eb7t \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng v\u00e0 th\u00f4ng tin. M\u1ed7i \u0111o\u1ea1n c\u00f3 m\u1ed9t \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng xuy\u00ean su\u1ed1t.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><b><i>(2<\/i><\/b><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">)<\/span><\/i><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 c\u00e1c t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf: such, these, they<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><b><i>(3)<\/i><\/b><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i: Firstly, Another Reason.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 49.2986%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u1eadn x\u00e9t 1 l\u00e0 \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 v\u1ec1 ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u1eadn x\u00e9t (2) (3) \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 v\u1ec1 ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Cohesion c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><b>Nh\u01b0 v\u1eady, ta c\u00f3 b\u1ea3ng ph\u00e2n bi\u1ec7t sau:<\/b><\/p>\n<table style=\"border-collapse: collapse; width: 100%; height: 122px;\">\n<tbody>\n<tr style=\"height: 24px;\">\n<td style=\"width: 50%; height: 24px; text-align: center;\"><strong>Coherence<\/strong><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%; height: 24px; text-align: center;\"><strong>Cohesion <\/strong><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"height: 74px;\">\n<td style=\"width: 50%; height: 74px;\">Coherence (t\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c) t\u1eadp trung v\u00e0o vi\u1ec7c ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n v\u00e0 s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng, h\u1ee3p l\u00fd v\u00e0 logic.<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%; height: 74px;\">Cohesion (t\u00ednh li\u00ean k\u1ebft) t\u1eadp trung v\u00e0o vi\u1ec7c li\u00ean k\u1ebft c\u00e1c c\u00e2u v\u00e0 \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng v\u1edbi nhau v\u1ec1 m\u1eb7t v\u1eadt l\u00fd, t\u1ee9c l\u00e0 vi\u1ec7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, t\u1eeb li\u00ean k\u1ebft ho\u1eb7c c\u00e1c t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"height: 24px;\">\n<td style=\"width: 50%; height: 24px;\"><strong>Th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u1edf c\u00e1c ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ph\u1ee5 nh\u01b0:<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>S\u1eafp x\u1ebfp c\u00e1c \u00fd theo m\u1ed9t tr\u1eadt t\u1ef1 h\u1ee3p l\u00fd (e.g., t\u1eeb t\u1ed5ng qu\u00e1t \u0111\u1ebfn c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3, nguy\u00ean nh\u00e2n \u0111\u1ebfn k\u1ebft qu\u1ea3).<\/li>\n<li>\u0110\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o m\u1ed7i \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n ch\u1ec9 xoay quanh m\u1ed9t \u00fd ch\u00ednh v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft v\u1edbi ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 chung c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/li>\n<li>S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u00e2u m\u1edf \u0111\u1ea7u \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n (topic sentence) \u0111\u1ec3 gi\u1edbi thi\u1ec7u n\u1ed9i dung c\u1ee7a \u0111o\u1ea1n.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%; height: 24px;\"><strong>Th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u1edf c\u00e1c ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ph\u1ee5 nh\u01b0:<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p (e.g., however, therefore, moreover).<\/li>\n<li>S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u00e1c t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf (they, them, it\u2026) m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch linh ho\u1ea1t<\/li>\n<li>Tr\u00e1nh l\u1ea1m d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i g\u00e2y r\u1ed1i m\u1eaft ho\u1eb7c kh\u00f4ng t\u1ef1 nhi\u00ean.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"III_Bi_kip_am_tron_diem_IELTS_Writing_voi_tieu_chi_Coherence_and_Cohesion\"><\/span><b>III. B\u00ed k\u00edp \u1eb5m tr\u1ecdn \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t band \u0111i\u1ec3m 7.0+ v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion ch\u00fang ta c\u1ea7n th\u1ef1c hi\u1ec7n nh\u1eefng \u0111i\u1ec1u g\u00ec, sau \u0111\u00e2y TCE s\u1ebd h\u01b0\u1edbng d\u1eabn \u0111\u1ebfn c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n nh\u00e9.<\/span><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_5747\" style=\"width: 1210px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-5747\" class=\"size-full wp-image-5747\" src=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/cach-lay-diem-ielts-writing-voi-coherence-and-cohesion-1.jpg\" alt=\"B\u00ed k\u00edp \u1eb5m tr\u1ecdn \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion\" width=\"1200\" height=\"750\" srcset=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/cach-lay-diem-ielts-writing-voi-coherence-and-cohesion-1.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/cach-lay-diem-ielts-writing-voi-coherence-and-cohesion-1-300x188.jpg 300w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/cach-lay-diem-ielts-writing-voi-coherence-and-cohesion-1-1024x640.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/cach-lay-diem-ielts-writing-voi-coherence-and-cohesion-1-768x480.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-5747\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">B\u00ed k\u00edp \u1eb5m tr\u1ecdn \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion<\/p><\/div>\n<p><b>B\u01b0\u1edbc 1: L\u1eadp d\u00e0n \u00fd<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Vi\u1ec7c l\u1eadp d\u00e0n \u00fd tr\u01b0\u1edbc <\/span><b>ph\u1ea7n m\u1edf b\u00e0i, th\u00e2n b\u00e0i v\u00e0 k\u1ebft b\u00e0i<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> gi\u00fap cho ng\u01b0\u1eddi vi\u1ebft c\u00f3 c\u00e1i nh\u00ecn t\u1ed5ng quan v\u1ec1 n\u1ed9i dung m\u00e0 m\u00ecnh s\u1ebd tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y, \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o \u0111o\u1ea1n th\u00e2n b\u00e0i s\u1ebd ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n v\u00e0 ch\u1ee9ng minh cho Thesis Statement \u1edf m\u1edf b\u00e0i. \u0110\u1ed3ng th\u1eddi, \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o k\u1ebft b\u00e0i th\u1ed1ng nh\u1ea5t v\u1edbi c\u00e1c \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng trong ph\u1ea7n th\u00e2n b\u00e0i.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ngo\u00e0i ra l\u1eadp d\u00e0n \u00fd c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3 cho c\u00e1c <\/span><b>main ideas v\u00e0 supporting sentences<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> trong ph\u1ea7n th\u00e2n b\u00e0i gi\u00fap \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o c\u00e1c ideas \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 logic, tr\u00e1nh vi\u1ec7c c\u00e1c \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng b\u1ecb l\u1eb7p v\u00e0 v\u00f2ng l\u1ea1i.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>Band 7.0 y\u00eau c\u1ea7u:<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Information and ideas are logically organised, and there is a clear progression throughout the response. (A few lapses may occur, but these are minor.) (Th\u00f4ng tin v\u00e0 \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch logic, v\u00e0 c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 ti\u1ebfn tri\u1ec3n r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng xuy\u00ean su\u1ed1t trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft. (C\u00f3 th\u1ec3 x\u1ea3y ra m\u1ed9t v\u00e0i sai s\u00f3t nh\u1ecf, nh\u01b0ng kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u00e1ng k\u1ec3.))<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><b>Ta c\u00f3 \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i d\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments?<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Quan \u0111i\u1ec3m c\u1ee7a TCE: Ch\u00ednh ph\u1ee7 v\u00e0 c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n n\u00ean l\u00e0 ng\u01b0\u1eddi t\u00e0i tr\u1ee3 cho nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u thu\u1ed1c v\u00e0 ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ph\u00e1p ch\u1eefa tr\u1ecb.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>Ta c\u00f3 ph\u1ea7n d\u00e0n \u00fd sau:<\/b><\/p>\n<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td colspan=\"2\"><b>Thesis:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Theo \u00fd ki\u1ebfn c\u1ee7a t\u00f4i, c\u1ea3 3 ngu\u1ed3n l\u1ef1c n\u00ean h\u1ed7 tr\u1ee3 v\u00e0 \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0 v\u00e0 nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u y h\u1ecdc.<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>Body 1:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> C\u00f4ng ty t\u01b0 nh\u00e2n n\u00ean h\u1ed7 tr\u1ee3 \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0 v\u00e0o nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u y h\u1ecdc<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><b>L\u00fd do 1:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> C\u00f4ng ty t\u01b0 nh\u00e2n c\u00f3 ngu\u1ed3n v\u1ed1n d\u1ed3i d\u00e0o, n\u00ean qu\u1ef9 \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0 s\u1ebd l\u1edbn =&gt; t\u0103ng kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng cho nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><b>L\u00fd do 2: <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng s\u1ebd mang l\u1ea1i l\u1ee3i nhu\u1eadn cho c\u00f4ng ty, \u0111\u1ed3ng th\u1eddi\u00a0 \u0111em \u0111\u1ebfn l\u1ee3i \u00edch cho c\u1ea3 x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><b>Body 2:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Ch\u00ednh ph\u1ee7 v\u00e0 c\u00e1c c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n c\u0169ng c\u1ea7n \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0 cho y h\u1ecdc .<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><b>\u00a0L\u00fd do 1:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Ch\u00ednh ph\u1ee7 c\u1ea7n \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0: \u0110\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n v\u1ec1 m\u1eb7t s\u1ee9c kh\u1ecfe c\u1ee7a nh\u00e2n d\u00e2n l\u00e0 tr\u00e1ch nhi\u1ec7m c\u1ee7a ch\u00ednh ph\u1ee7 =&gt; tr\u00e1nh t\u00ecnh tr\u1ea1ng \u0111\u1ea5t n\u01b0\u1edbc g\u1eb7p v\u1ea5n \u0111\u1ec1 v\u1ec1 s\u1ee9c kh\u1ecfe kh\u1ea9n c\u1ea5p nh\u01b0 Covid<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><b>L\u00fd do 2: <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ng\u01b0\u1eddi d\u00e2n n\u00ean \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0: \u0111\u00f3ng g\u00f3p cho x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i v\u00e0 tr\u1ef1c ti\u1ebfp h\u01b0\u1edfng l\u1ee3i n\u1ebfu c\u00e1c nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td colspan=\"2\"><b>Conclusion<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">: K\u1ebft lu\u1eadn, t\u00f4i tin r\u1eb1ng ch\u00ednh ph\u1ee7 v\u00e0 m\u1ecdi c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n trong x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i, ch\u1ee9 kh\u00f4ng ph\u1ea3i c\u00e1c c\u00f4ng ty t\u01b0 nh\u00e2n, n\u00ean t\u00e0i tr\u1ee3 cho c\u00e1c nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u nh\u1eb1m kh\u00e1m ph\u00e1 ra nh\u1eefng lo\u1ea1i thu\u1ed1c m\u1edbi v\u00e0 c\u00e1c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ph\u00e1p ch\u1eefa b\u1ec7nh.<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><b>Vi\u1ec7c l\u1eadp d\u00e0n \u00fd nh\u01b0 tr\u00ean \u0111\u00e3 gi\u1ea3i quy\u1ebft \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c y\u00eau c\u1ea7u sau:<\/b><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 98.8241%;\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1c \u00fd kh\u00f4ng b\u1ecb tr\u00f9ng l\u1eb7p nhau v\u00e0 c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 ti\u1ebfn tri\u1ec3n r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng. M\u1ed7i \u0111o\u1ea1n \u0111\u1ec1u b\u00e1m s\u00e1t m\u1ed9t n\u1ed9i dung ch\u00ednh.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u01b0 v\u1eady v\u1edbi vi\u1ec7c l\u1eadp d\u00e0n \u00fd, ch\u00fang ta \u0111\u00e3 x\u1eed l\u00fd \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c m\u1ed9t ph\u1ea7n trong y\u00eau c\u1ea7u v\u1ec1 ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>B\u01b0\u1edbc 2: S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111a d\u1ea1ng v\u00e0 hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111a d\u1ea1ng v\u00e0 hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, tr\u01b0\u1edbc h\u1ebft c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n \u0111\u1ecdc c\u1ea7n trang b\u1ecb cho m\u00ecnh \u0111a d\u1ea1ng c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i v\u1edbi t\u1eebng m\u1ee5c \u0111\u00edch s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng, v\u00e0 \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o r\u1eb1ng b\u1ea1n n\u1eafm r\u00f5 c\u00e1ch s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u1ee7a ch\u00fang.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>M\u1eddi c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n tham kh\u1ea3o b\u1ea3ng sau:<\/b><\/p>\n<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\"><b>M\u1ee5c \u0111\u00edch<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\"><b>T\u1eeb\u00a0<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\"><b>C\u00e1ch d\u00f9ng<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\"><b>V\u00ed d\u1ee5<\/b><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td rowspan=\"3\"><b>Th\u00eam th\u00f4ng tin\u00a0<\/b><\/td>\n<td><b>Moreover<\/b><\/td>\n<td rowspan=\"2\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<td rowspan=\"3\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The project was tough. Moreover\/ Furthermore\/ In addition, the leader appears to be unreachable.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">D\u1ef1 \u00e1n r\u1ea5t th\u1eed th\u00e1ch. H\u01a1n n\u1eefa, ng\u01b0\u1eddi l\u00e3nh \u0111\u1ea1o c\u00f3 v\u1ebb kh\u00f3 ti\u1ebfp c\u1eadn.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>Furthermore<\/b><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>In addition<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u ho\u1eb7c gi\u1eefa c\u00e2u, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td colspan=\"4\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>\u0110\u01b0a v\u00ed d\u1ee5\u00a0<\/b><\/td>\n<td><b>For example<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u ho\u1eb7c gi\u1eefa c\u00e2u, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">There are many animals here. For example, lions and tigers.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f3 nhi\u1ec1u lo\u00e0i \u0111\u1ed9ng v\u1eadt \u1edf \u0111\u00e2y. V\u00ed d\u1ee5, s\u01b0 t\u1eed v\u00e0 h\u1ed5.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><\/td>\n<td><b>Such as<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Theo sau l\u00e0 danh t\u1eeb ho\u1eb7c c\u1ee5m danh t\u1eeb<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">I like fruits such as apples and oranges.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">T\u00f4i th\u00edch c\u00e1c lo\u1ea1i tr\u00e1i c\u00e2y nh\u01b0 t\u00e1o v\u00e0 cam.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td colspan=\"4\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>Nguy\u00ean nh\u00e2n &#8211; K\u1ebft qu\u1ea3<\/b><\/td>\n<td><b>Therefore\/ Thus<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u ho\u1eb7c gi\u1eefa c\u00e2u, ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<td rowspan=\"2\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">He studied hard. Therefore\/ As a result, he passed the exam with flying colors.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Anh \u1ea5y h\u1ecdc ch\u0103m ch\u1ec9. V\u00ec v\u1eady, anh \u1ea5y \u0111\u00e3 v\u01b0\u1ee3t qua k\u1ef3 thi v\u1edbi k\u1ebft qu\u1ea3 cao.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><\/td>\n<td><b>As a result<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u ho\u1eb7c gi\u1eefa c\u00e2u, ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><\/td>\n<td><b>Because of\/ Due to\/ Owing to<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng tr\u01b0\u1edbc danh t\u1eeb<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Because of the avalanche, we were cooped up in our room.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">V\u00ec tr\u1eadn l\u1edf tuy\u1ebft, ch\u00fang t\u00f4i ph\u1ea3i giam m\u00ecnh trong ph\u00f2ng.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><\/td>\n<td><b>Because<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">N\u1ed1i 2 m\u1ec7nh \u0111\u1ec1 v\u1edbi nhau<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">He left because he couldn\u2019t stand his wife\u2019s constant complaints.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Anh \u1ea5y r\u1eddi \u0111i v\u00ec kh\u00f4ng th\u1ec3 ch\u1ecbu \u0111\u1ef1ng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c nh\u1eefng l\u1eddi ph\u00e0n n\u00e0n li\u00ean t\u1ee5c c\u1ee7a v\u1ee3.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td colspan=\"4\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td rowspan=\"3\"><b>\u0110\u01b0a ra s\u1ef1 \u0111\u1ed1i l\u1eadp<\/b><\/td>\n<td><b>However\/ Nevertheless<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u ho\u1eb7c gi\u1eefa c\u00e2u, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">She was late compared to other participants. However, she didn\u2019t miss the important part of the meeting.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f4 \u1ea5y \u0111\u1ebfn mu\u1ed9n so v\u1edbi nh\u1eefng ng\u01b0\u1eddi tham gia kh\u00e1c. Tuy nhi\u00ean, c\u00f4 \u1ea5y kh\u00f4ng b\u1ecf l\u1ee1 ph\u1ea7n quan tr\u1ecdng c\u1ee7a cu\u1ed9c h\u1ecdp.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>Although\/ Though<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Theo sau l\u00e0 m\u1ec7nh \u0111\u1ec1<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Although it was raining heavily, we decided to go for a walk to enjoy the fresh air.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u1eb7c d\u00f9 tr\u1eddi m\u01b0a to, ch\u00fang t\u00f4i quy\u1ebft \u0111\u1ecbnh \u0111i d\u1ea1o \u0111\u1ec3 t\u1eadn h\u01b0\u1edfng kh\u00f4ng kh\u00ed trong l\u00e0nh<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>Despite\/ In spite of<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Theo sau l\u00e0 danh t\u1eeb\/V-ing<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Despite the loud, distracting noise, he managed to concentrate on his work.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u1eb7c d\u00f9 c\u00f3 ti\u1ebfng \u1ed3n l\u1edbn v\u00e0 g\u00e2y sao nh\u00e3ng, anh \u1ea5y v\u1eabn t\u1eadp trung v\u00e0o c\u00f4ng vi\u1ec7c c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td colspan=\"4\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td rowspan=\"2\"><b>K\u1ebft lu\u1eadn<\/b><\/td>\n<td><b>In conclusion<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u, \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<td rowspan=\"2\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In conclusion\/ To sum up, technology has significantly enhanced the quality of our lives, making tasks easier and more efficient.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">T\u00f3m l\u1ea1i, c\u00f4ng ngh\u1ec7 \u0111\u00e3 c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n \u0111\u00e1ng k\u1ec3 ch\u1ea5t l\u01b0\u1ee3ng cu\u1ed9c s\u1ed1ng c\u1ee7a ch\u00fang ta, l\u00e0m cho c\u00e1c c\u00f4ng vi\u1ec7c tr\u1edf n\u00ean d\u1ec5 d\u00e0ng v\u00e0 hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 h\u01a1n.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>To sum up<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u,\u00a0 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ng\u0103n c\u00e1ch b\u1eb1ng d\u1ea5u ph\u1ea9y<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td colspan=\"4\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td rowspan=\"2\"><b>M\u1ee5c \u0111\u00edch<\/b><\/td>\n<td><b>In order to<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Theo sau l\u00e0 \u0111\u1ed9ng t\u1eeb nguy\u00ean m\u1eabu<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">She studies hard in order to achieve her dreams as a philosophy professional.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f4 \u1ea5y h\u1ecdc ch\u0103m ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u01b0\u1edbc m\u01a1 tr\u1edf th\u00e0nh m\u1ed9t gi\u00e1o s\u01b0 tri\u1ebft h\u1ecdc.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td><b>So that<\/b><\/td>\n<td><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Theo sau l\u00e0 m\u1ec7nh \u0111\u1ec1<\/span><\/td>\n<td><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">He spoke slowly so that everyone could grasp the concept.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Anh \u1ea5y n\u00f3i ch\u1eadm r\u00e3i \u0111\u1ec3 m\u1ecdi ng\u01b0\u1eddi c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 n\u1eafm b\u1eaft \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c kh\u00e1i ni\u1ec7m.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ngo\u00e0i ra, sau khi vi\u1ebft xong b\u00e0i, c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n \u0111\u1ecdc l\u1ea1i b\u00e0i m\u1ed9t l\u1ea7n n\u1eefa, v\u00e0 ki\u1ec3m tra l\u1ea1i c\u00e1c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, xem c\u00e2u n\u00e0o c\u00f2n thi\u1ebfu t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, ho\u1eb7c t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i n\u00e0o c\u00f3 c\u1ea7n c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n hay kh\u00f4ng.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>B\u01b0\u1edbc 3: S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 c\u00e1c t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf, tr\u00e1nh l\u1eb7p t\u1eeb.<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1c t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf th\u01b0\u1eddng d\u00f9ng trong Writing task 2 bao g\u1ed3m c\u00e1c \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ecbnh. Sau \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 c\u00e1c \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ecbnh th\u01b0\u1eddng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c d\u00f9ng trong Task 2 m\u00e0 TCE \u0111\u00e3 t\u1ed5ng h\u1ee3p l\u1ea1i.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"text-align: center; width: 9.91984%;\"><b>T\u1eeb ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ecbnh<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center; width: 39.0782%;\"><b>C\u00e1ch s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center; width: 50.1002%;\"><b>V\u00ed d\u1ee5<\/b><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 9.91984%;\"><b>This<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 39.0782%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng tr\u01b0\u1edbc danh t\u1eeb\u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u l\u00e0m ch\u1ee7 ng\u1eef<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50.1002%;\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">This solution is effective in addressing the issue.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Gi\u1ea3i ph\u00e1p n\u00e0y hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 trong vi\u1ec7c gi\u1ea3i quy\u1ebft v\u1ea5n \u0111\u1ec1.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 9.91984%;\"><b>These<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 39.0782%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng tr\u01b0\u1edbc danh t\u1eeb s\u1ed1 nhi\u1ec1u<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u l\u00e0m ch\u1ee7 ng\u1eef<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50.1002%;\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">These ideas are widely accepted by experts.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u1eefng \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng n\u00e0y \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c c\u00e1c chuy\u00ean gia ch\u1ea5p nh\u1eadn r\u1ed9ng r\u00e3i.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 9.91984%;\"><b>That<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 39.0782%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng tr\u01b0\u1edbc danh t\u1eeb\u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u l\u00e0m ch\u1ee7 ng\u1eef<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50.1002%;\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">That phenomenon can be seen in many countries especially the developing ones like Vietnam.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Hi\u1ec7n t\u01b0\u1ee3ng \u0111\u00f3 c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 th\u1ea5y \u1edf nhi\u1ec1u qu\u1ed1c gia, \u0111\u1eb7c bi\u1ec7t l\u00e0 c\u00e1c qu\u1ed1c gia \u0111ang ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n nh\u01b0 Vi\u1ec7t Nam.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 9.91984%;\"><b>Those<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 39.0782%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng tr\u01b0\u1edbc danh t\u1eeb s\u1ed1 nhi\u1ec1u<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ee9ng \u0111\u1ea7u c\u00e2u l\u00e0m ch\u1ee7 ng\u1eef<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50.1002%;\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Those policies have led to positive changes.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u1eefng ch\u00ednh s\u00e1ch \u0111\u00f3 \u0111\u00e3 d\u1eabn \u0111\u1ebfn nh\u1eefng thay \u0111\u1ed5i t\u00edch c\u1ef1c.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 9.91984%;\"><b>Such<\/b><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 39.0782%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Th\u01b0\u1eddng \u0111\u1ee9ng tr\u01b0\u1edbc danh t\u1eeb, c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111i k\u00e8m v\u1edbi m\u1ed9t t\u00ednh t\u1eeb \u0111\u1ec3 nh\u1ea5n m\u1ea1nh.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50.1002%;\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Such an approach may be risky.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1ch ti\u1ebfp c\u1eadn nh\u01b0 v\u1eady c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 mang l\u1ea1i r\u1ee7i ro.<\/span><\/i><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>Vi\u1ec7c \u00e1p d\u1ee5ng nhu\u1ea7n nhuy\u1ec5n c\u1ea3 ba b\u01b0\u1edbc tr\u00ean \u0111\u00f2i h\u1ecfi s\u1ef1 luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp c\u00f3 \u0111\u1ecbnh h\u01b0\u1edbng v\u00e0 ph\u1ea3n h\u1ed3i li\u00ean t\u1ee5c t\u1eeb ng\u01b0\u1eddi c\u00f3 chuy\u00ean m\u00f4n. N\u1ebfu b\u1ea1n \u0111ang \u0111\u1eb7t m\u1ee5c ti\u00eau b\u1ee9t ph\u00e1 band \u0111i\u1ec3m Writing v\u00e0 mu\u1ed1n x\u00e2y d\u1ef1ng k\u1ef9 n\u0103ng n\u00e0y m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch b\u00e0i b\u1ea3n, h\u00e3y tham kh\u1ea3o l\u1ed9 tr\u00ecnh h\u1ecdc t\u1ea1i kh\u00f3a IELTS Advanced (6.0 &#8211; 7.0), n\u01a1i c\u00e1c gi\u00e1o vi\u00ean s\u1ebd h\u01b0\u1edbng d\u1eabn b\u1ea1n chi ti\u1ebft c\u00e1ch tri\u1ec3n khai \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng v\u00e0 ho\u00e0n thi\u1ec7n c\u1ea5u tr\u00fac b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/khoa-hoc\/ielts-advanced\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-size: 14px;\"><button style=\"background-color: #7f141d; color: white; font-weight: bold; border-radius: 10px; border: 2px solid #7f141d; padding: 10px 20px;\">Kh\u00f3a h\u1ecdc IELTS Advanced<\/button><\/span><\/a><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u01b0 v\u1eady, sau khi vi\u1ebft xong b\u1ea3n nh\u00e1p \u0111\u1ea7u ti\u00ean, th\u00ed sinh c\u1ea7n \u0111\u1ecdc l\u1ea1i b\u00e0i v\u00e0 th\u1ef1c hi\u1ec7n c\u00e1c checklist sau v\u1edbi b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh:<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 98.3361%;\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><b>Coherence and Cohesion<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1c th\u00f4ng tin v\u00e0 \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eafp x\u1ebfp m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch logic v\u00e0 th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1ef1 ti\u1ebfn tri\u1ec3n hay ch\u01b0a?<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft: t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, t\u1eeb thay th\u1ebf \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c v\u00e0 linh ho\u1ea1t hay ch\u01b0a<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-checked=\"false\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">B\u00e0i vi\u1ebft \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c chia \u0111o\u1ea1n ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p v\u00e0 \u0111\u1ea7y \u0111\u1ee7 hay ch\u01b0a.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"IV_Nhung_loi_Coherence_and_Cohesion_pho_bien\"><\/span><b>IV. Nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i Coherence and Cohesion ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<div id=\"attachment_5749\" style=\"width: 1210px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-5749\" class=\"size-full wp-image-5749\" src=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/nhung-loi-coherence-and-cohesion-pho-bien-1.jpg\" alt=\"Nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i Coherence and Cohesion ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn\" width=\"1200\" height=\"750\" srcset=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/nhung-loi-coherence-and-cohesion-pho-bien-1.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/nhung-loi-coherence-and-cohesion-pho-bien-1-300x188.jpg 300w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/nhung-loi-coherence-and-cohesion-pho-bien-1-1024x640.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/blogs\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/nhung-loi-coherence-and-cohesion-pho-bien-1-768x480.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-5749\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i Coherence and Cohesion ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn<\/p><\/div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u1ede ph\u1ea7n ti\u1ebfp theo, TCE \u0111\u01b0a ra c\u00e1c l\u1ed7i ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn s\u1ebd \u1ea3nh h\u01b0\u1edfng \u0111\u1ebfn \u0111i\u1ec3m CC m\u00e0 c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n h\u1ecdc sinh th\u01b0\u1eddng m\u1eafc ph\u1ea3i khi vi\u1ebft b\u00e0i Task 2.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ta s\u1ebd c\u00f9ng ph\u00e2n t\u00edch m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n \u0111\u1ec3 th\u1ea5y c\u00e1c l\u1ed7i ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn m\u00e0 h\u1ecdc sinh c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 m\u1eafc ph\u1ea3i trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>L\u1ed7i 1: D\u00f9ng sai ho\u1eb7c d\u00f9ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i c\u00f2n h\u1ea1n ch\u1ebf<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">On the other hand, while the time at work is necessary in a human\u2019s life, time allocated to other aspects is also of equal importance. <span style=\"background-color: yellow;\">The first,<\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0people should spend quality time with their loved ones, especially their family members<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. <span style=\"background-color: yellow;\">In the second place<\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, we also need to set aside time for ourselves, for our hobbies because sometimes, we forget to relax due to hectic lifestyles with deadlines to meet and work-life pressure. <span style=\"background-color: yellow;\">Talk more about this<\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">,<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> some stress relieving activities can simply involve listening to music, reading a book or taking a gentle walk around one\u2019s surrounding.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110o\u1ea1n v\u0103n tr\u00ean s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i ch\u01b0a chu\u1ea9n: \u201cThe first\u201d \u201cIn the second place\u201d, \u201cTalk more about this\u201d. \u0110\u00e2y l\u00e0 l\u1ed7i c\u1ee7a ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion band 5.0: make inaccurate use of cohesive devices<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>C\u00e1ch s\u1eeda:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The first =&gt; firstly<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In the second place =&gt; Secondly<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Talk more about this =&gt; To explain further<\/span><\/p>\n<p>Vi\u1ec7c nh\u1eadn di\u1ec7n v\u00e0 s\u1eeda nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i sai tr\u00ean \u0111\u00f2i h\u1ecfi m\u1ed9t con m\u1eaft chuy\u00ean m\u00f4n. R\u1ea5t c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n c\u00f2n ti\u1ec1m \u1ea9n nh\u1eefng v\u1ea5n \u0111\u1ec1 v\u1ec1 logic v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n kh\u00f3 t\u1ef1 nh\u1eadn ra. \u0110\u1ec3 c\u00f3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c m\u1ed9t &#8220;ch\u1ea9n \u0111o\u00e1n&#8221; to\u00e0n di\u1ec7n v\u00e0 ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c nh\u1ea5t, c\u00e1ch t\u1ed1t nh\u1ea5t l\u00e0 tham gia m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i Thi th\u1eed IELTS v\u00e0 nh\u1eadn ph\u1ea3n h\u1ed3i chi ti\u1ebft t\u1eeb c\u00e1c chuy\u00ean gia ch\u1ea5m b\u00e0i, gi\u00fap b\u1ea1n bi\u1ebft ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c m\u00ecnh c\u1ea7n c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n \u1edf \u0111\u00e2u.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/thecatalyst.edu.vn\/thi-thu\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"font-size: 14px;\"><button style=\"background-color: #7f141d; color: white; font-weight: bold; border-radius: 10px; border: 2px solid #7f141d; padding: 10px 20px;\">Thi th\u1eed IELTS tr\u00ean m\u00e1y t\u00ednh<\/button><\/span><\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>L\u1ed7i 2: Kh\u00f4ng c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n trong lu\u1eadn \u0111i\u1ec3m<\/b><\/p>\n<p><b>\u0110o\u1ea1n v\u0103n:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">On the other hand, while the time at work is necessary in a human\u2019s life, <\/span><b>time allocated to other aspects is also of equal importance.<\/b> <span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(1)<span style=\"background-color: yellow;\">Firstly, people should spend quality time with their loved ones, especially their family members. (2)Secondly, we also need to set aside time for ourselves, for our hobbies because sometimes, we forget to relax due to hectic lifestyles with deadlines to meet and work-life pressure.<\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">To explain further, some stress relieving activities can simply involve listening to music, reading a book or taking a gentle walk around one\u2019s surrounding.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f3 th\u1ec3 th\u1ea5y topic sentence ch\u1ec9 ra \u201c<\/span><b>th\u1eddi gian d\u00e0nh cho c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 kh\u00e1c c\u0169ng quan tr\u1ecdng nh\u01b0 d\u00e0nh cho c\u00f4ng vi\u1ec7c<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201d, tuy nhi\u00ean, dea 1, 2 ch\u1ec9 li\u1ec7t k\u00ea ra <\/span><b>c\u00e1c y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 kh\u00e1c<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> m\u00e0 con ng\u01b0\u1eddi n\u00ean d\u00e0nh th\u1eddi gian, ch\u1ee9 kh\u00f4ng gi\u1ea3i th\u00edch \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c nguy\u00ean nh\u00e2n \u201c<\/span><b>t\u1ea1i sao th\u1eddi gian ch\u00fang c\u0169ng quan tr\u1ecdng nh\u01b0 th\u1eddi gian d\u00e0nh cho c\u00f4ng vi\u1ec7c<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201d.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1ch gi\u1ea3i quy\u1ebft. C\u00e1c b\u1ea1n h\u1ecdc sinh n\u00ean tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n theo c\u1ea5u tr\u00fac PEEL: Point &#8211; Explain &#8211; Example &#8211; Link, \u0111\u1ec3 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>Vi\u1ebft l\u1ea1i: <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">On the other hand, while time at work is necessary in a human\u2019s life, time allocated to other aspects is equally important. This is because human life is multifaceted, and professional life constitutes only a part of it. In addition to work, family requires attention and care. If an excessive amount of time is spent on work, the balance in one\u2019s life can be disrupted. For example, a lack of quality time with family can lead to feelings of loneliness and detachment, which often results in lower levels of happiness. Therefore, allocating time to family is crucial for achieving a well-rounded and fulfilling life, not just a successful career.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>L\u1ed7i 3: S\u1eafp x\u1ebfp \u00fd l\u1ed9n x\u1ed9n<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Elderly people <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(1)<span style=\"background-color: yellow;\">should be the priority because they are old<\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. Elderly people are very weak as well so they need help. Elderly people are also poorer and cannot go to hospital. If the government invests in elderly people, they can be healthier. Therefore, the care of elderly people should be a priority of government spending. <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(2)<span style=\"background-color: yellow;\">When the government spends money to the care of elderly people, the society will be happier and healthier.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(1)<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> C\u00e2u l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn \u0111\u1ea7u ti\u00ean thi\u1ebfu t\u00ednh h\u1ee3p l\u00fd: ng\u01b0\u1eddi gi\u00e0 c\u1ea7n \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ch\u0103m s\u00f3c nh\u01b0ng kh\u00f4ng c\u00f3 ngh\u0129a\/ v\u00e0 kh\u00f4ng th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c vi\u1ec7c ch\u0103m s\u00f3c h\u1ecd l\u00e0 v\u1ea5n \u0111\u1ec1 c\u1ea7n \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u01b0u ti\u00ean.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(2) <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Trong th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 1, th\u00ed sinh vi\u1ebft ra c\u00e1c l\u00fd do v\u00ec sao n\u00ean d\u00e0nh ti\u1ec1n cho ng\u01b0\u1eddi gi\u00e0, \u0111\u00e3 ch\u1ed1t l\u1ea1i b\u1eb1ng c\u00e2u \u201c<\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Therefore, the care of elderly people should be a priority of government spending<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201d nh\u01b0ng l\u1ea1i ti\u1ebfp t\u1ee5c \u0111i v\u00f2ng l\u1ea1i nh\u1eefng \u00fd chi ti\u1ebft h\u01a1n \u1edf \u0111\u1eb1ng sau: \u201cwhen the government\u2026<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>Vi\u1ebft l\u1ea1i:<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> Elderly people should be a priority because they hold a wealth of knowledge. Over the years, they accumulate valuable experience and have a deep understanding of culture. However, as they are often weak and prone to illness, much of this precious knowledge could be lost if not preserved. Therefore, it is crucial to prioritize their care and ensure that their wisdom is passed on to future generations.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"V_Cohesion_and_Coherence_Exercise\"><\/span><b>V. Cohesion and Coherence Exercise<\/b><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><b>B\u00e0i 1: \u0110i\u1ec1n t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i th\u00edch h\u1ee3p v\u00e0o \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n sau:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In today&#8217;s fast-paced world, balancing work and personal life has become increasingly difficult. <\/span><b>(1)<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> ______, many individuals find themselves spending long hours at the office, leaving little time for their families or personal activities. <\/span><b>(2)<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> ______, this imbalance can lead to increased stress levels, affecting both mental and physical health. <\/span><b>(3)<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> ______, it is crucial to find strategies that can help individuals manage their time effectively.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">One such strategy is to prioritize tasks. <\/span><b>(4)<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> ______, individuals can focus on completing essential work first and then dedicate their remaining time to family or leisure activities. <\/span><b>(5)<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> ______, creating clear boundaries between work and personal life is also necessary. This might involve setting specific hours for work and ensuring that personal time is protected. <\/span><b>(6)<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> ______, while balancing work and personal life may seem challenging, with the right approach, it is possible to create a healthier, more fulfilling lifestyle.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>B\u00e0i 2: S\u1eafp x\u1ebfp c\u00e1c c\u00e2u sau \u0111\u1ec3 t\u1ea1o th\u00e0nh m\u1ed9t \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c, c\u00f3 logic r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng.<\/b><\/p>\n<p><b>\u0110\u1ec1 b\u00e0i: <\/b><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Do you agree or disagree with the idea that technology has made our lives easier?<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><b>C\u00e1c c\u00e2u r\u1eddi r\u1ea1c:<\/b><\/p>\n<ol>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Technology has also enabled people to stay connected with others regardless of geographical distances.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">However, some argue that technology has increased our dependence on devices, which could lead to negative consequences.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">For example, with the advent of smartphones and the internet, people can now communicate with others instantly, whether it be for personal or professional reasons.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In my opinion, technology has made our lives easier in many ways, particularly in terms of communication and access to information.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">For instance, in education, students can now access a vast amount of knowledge online, making learning more flexible and accessible.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Despite these benefits, excessive reliance on technology may cause social isolation and a lack of face-to-face interaction.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Overall, while technology has its drawbacks, I believe the advantages far outweigh them.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Thanks to technology, we can now find information in a matter of seconds, which saves time and effort.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><b>B\u00e0i 3: Vi\u1ebft \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n v\u1edbi Topic sentence sau theo c\u1ea5u tr\u00fac PEEL:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">I believe that students should focus on multiple subjects at a time rather than just one. <\/span><b>This is because<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> \u2026\u2026\u2026.\u00a0 <\/span><b>For instance<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, \u2026\u2026.. <\/span><b>Therefore<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, \u2026\u2026..<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>\u0110\u00e1p \u00e1n:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><b>B\u00e0i 1:<\/b><\/p>\n<ol>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">However,<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">As a result,<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Therefore,<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">For instance,<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Moreover,<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ultimately,<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><b>B\u00e0i 2:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110o\u1ea1n v\u0103n v\u1edbi th\u1ee9 t\u1ef1 \u0111\u00fang:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In my opinion, technology has made our lives easier in many ways, particularly in terms of communication and access to information. <\/span><b>For example<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, with the advent of smartphones and the internet, people can now communicate with others instantly, whether it be for personal or professional reasons. <\/span><b>Thanks to technology<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, we can now find information in a matter of seconds, which saves time and effort. <\/span><b>Technology has also enabled people to stay connected with others regardless of geographical distances.<\/b> <b>For instance<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, in education, students can now access a vast amount of knowledge online, making learning more flexible and accessible. <\/span><b>However<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, some argue that technology has increased our dependence on devices, which could lead to negative consequences. <\/span><b>Despite these benefits<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, excessive reliance on technology may cause social isolation and a lack of face-to-face interaction. <\/span><b>Overall<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, while technology has its drawbacks, I believe the advantages far outweigh them.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>B\u00e0i 3:\u00a0<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110o\u1ea1n v\u0103n g\u1ee3i \u00fd:\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">I believe that students should focus on multiple subjects at a time rather than just one. <\/span><b>This is because<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> learning multiple subjects helps students develop a broader range of skills and knowledge, which prepares them for a variety of challenges in the future. <\/span><b>For instance<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, a student studying both mathematics and literature will not only improve their problem-solving abilities but also enhance their critical thinking and communication skills. <\/span><b>Therefore<\/b><span 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